As I looked out the classroom window I saw fields of grass as flat as a hockey arena. I saw the tall trees swaying side to side, creating wind while birds flutter through them. I saw the big bin parked at the end of the field , as time passed and I saw the white fluffy clouds bunched together like candy floss, slowly turning black getting ready to let all the water out, like candy floss melting.
You did a great job following the criteria using similies .I really like the bit when you said "slowly turning black ready to let all the water out, like candy floss melting."
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