As I look out my window
I saw dark green trees
swaying like people waving their hands side to side.
I saw a brown wooden fence
like security guards protecting the houses from any school kids getting through.
I saw white goal posts standing still,
waiting for kids to come play
and I saw white fluffy clouds waiting to explode in rain.
I like how you stuck to the criteria and you have good verbs, you have picked the right words for the good. The thing I liked the best is the way you describe your similies.
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