Friday, December 2, 2016

Maanawatanga's Post on Friday, 2 December 2016


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In room 16 we have been learning how to write a poem about our special person. My special person is my mum.

3 comments:

  1. You and your mum clearly have some fun moments together. You need to follow the model more closely next time, especially to determine where the poet used line-breaks to create rhythm and emphasis: ).

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  2. I like the how you said
    sometimes my mum
    Is so grumpy that
    Every time the house
    Gets messy she burst
    Like a ballon.👍👍👍

    (Bra¥den)

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  3. When she laughs at her own jokes is,funny 😎

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