Looking out my class window
As I look out the class window l saw the scorching sun beaming like a hot light bulb. I saw cartoon faces on hanging bags.
I saw green rubbish bins waiting to be filled and I saw the cloud filled sky looking like a bunch of pink candy floss floating
Well done Elistah, I felt like I was looking out the window with you. Your candyfloss simile would be even more authentic if you were observing a sunrise or sunset (Mr Ronalds).
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