As I looked out from my deck I saw magnificent, magical pink blossoms swaying in the breeze like a princess's ball gown. I saw four blue birds chirping to the sound of the guitar. I saw two creepy, stalking cats staring at its pray like the way a dragons protecting a princess locked up in a tower. And I saw my Mum wave to me when she was going to work. (Issac Whalen)
Well done Issac, you have followed the criteria. Your princess's ballgown simile creates an awesome word picture.
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